If one of your characters feels flat or boring, perhaps it’s because you haven’t given them enough ATTENTION. All relationships, even fictional ones, demand care. Character development comes through spending time with your characters on the page; listening to them talk about things that matter to them, following them as they engage with difficult problems, sharing in their emotions when they fail or succeed.Think of the character development scenes in this article as though they were dates with your character.Take your time!
Enjoy the details as they unfold.You may like to develop your character in detail before you begin writing your story, or you may just start writing and see where the story takes you.Either way, you need narrative opportunities to show the reader what stuff your character is made of, and these scene ideas can fit almost anywhere in your story.They’re also perfect for! Pick one to write about every day, and mix them up with! Character development comes through., TESTS & TRIALS – any time the character faces resistance in their world, there is an opportunity to reveal something new about them, or to reinforce an existing trait. The more pressure the character is under, the more you will need to develop them to meet their difficulties.
REACTION – meaningful and consistent reactions to the events around them are what create characters. This might take the form of, reflection, interaction, or even inaction. REFLECTION, SELF-ASSESSMENT – character doesn’t always have to be developed through action.
Sometimes solitary reflection and assessment can be a great way to slow down and delve deeper. INTERACTION, RELATIONSHIPS – in many ways, the character is defined through contrast and correlation to the other characters in the story. Relationships apply push and pull forces on the character that cause them to react, make decisions, and re-assess their own identity. CHANGE, PROGRESS – one of the main differences between a flat character and a round one is that a round character changes, whereas a flat character stays static. A character’s reaction to change is one of their most defining traits and will often influence their other characteristics. DECISIONS, CHOICES – decisions are where the intersects the character’s mind most clearly.
3 Tips for Using Mulitple Point of View Characters. Limit the number of POV characters. A general caution is to limit the number of POV characters so the reader can be emotionally invested in those few. Zuckerman, in How to Write the Blockbuster Novel, recommends no more than five main characters. Usually, one of the characters emerges as the main character and gets more space, leaving the others as secondary-main characters, so to speak.Of course, there are lots of exceptions. On the extreme end of the spectrum, Seedfolk, by Paul Fleischman, changes POV with every chapter, dipping into the life of a different member of the community and never repeats a character; I would argue, though, that the real main character of that story is the community, arrived at through these multiple POV. In the end, I still cared for the characters, which is the main point here, and many of their conflicts were resolved while in a different POV, keeping the conflict/resolution connections intact.
Changing POV perspective. When you change from one character’s POV to another character’s POV, can you change from 1st person to third person? In Donna Jo Napoli’s, Zel, she has three main characters: Rapunzel, told in 3rd; the prince, told in 3rd; and the mother, told in first. Napoli said that the mother had to be in first person so the reader would understand how much of her actions was motivated by love for Rapunzel.
So, yes, you can change from 1st to 3rd: the question is why do you want to? What will it add to the story? Napoli had a reason for this choice — better characterization of the mother. What is your reason?. Use Strong Scene Cuts.
One good reason to use multiple POV characters is it allows for strong scene cuts. Just as one character falls into a dangerous situation, SCENE CUT. We leave that character hanging on the edge of a pit, while we explore another character’s side of the story, until that character is in danger. SCENE CUT, back to the first character, where we left him about to fall onto a shrub that breaks his fall before he finds himself in some other danger. Kate BaldwinFebruary 21, 2012I am writing a book with multiple characters.
I have chosen to write the main character in a first person POV and the other important characters are written in third person omniscient. All of the characters (and there are more than five) are important to my book as they each represent a different archetype, and the story is about their friendship.Though I have the plot and subplots worked out, I’m finding it difficult to fit it into a story map because of all of the characters. I would really like to find a book to help me address this very specific writing problem. Any advice on how to pull this off or on any references I could check into? One idea I had for keeping the number of POVs down was to only show some characters through the eyes of the first-person POV of the main character. ZiaAugust 27, 2012I’m writing a historical fiction novel with a romantic undertone ala Austen.
It started omniscient, as I thought it was the only way to tell some of the history and to give the reader backstory to a scene that the MC would eventually walk into in a fish-out-of-water kind of way. The more I wrote, it started leaning first person limited with a few paragraphs here and there saying what another character was thinking in response to the MC or giving a character’s history, something the MC is unaware of. I fear I’ve violated every POV rule.If I rewrite and stick to third person limited, can I also intersperse historical facts into the writing? I try for most of these details to come out in dialogue, but sometimes describing a scene requires stating historical facts for the reader that the MC does not know. I also need scenes where the MC does not go or is not allowed to enter. RobynAugust 30, 2012Hello there,In the story that I am writing, the point of view shifts between four key characters depending on the scene/chapter. I am using third person, limited POV, in past tense– and I have a small problem.
One of the POV characters is going to die three-fourths of the way through the story. Is it still acceptable to write from that characters point of view up until her death (I will be in one of the other characters’ heads for the death scene), or should I not write from the POV of a character that is going to die?Thanks. September 3, 2012Hi Darcy,I’m writing a YA Novel. The protagonist is a 16 year old girl. I have started out in first person POV. I am finding it increasingly difficult to tell the story in 100% first person.I am flirting with the idea of going back to the beginning of the book, and doing multiple first person’s with possibly 3 other major characters.
The 16 year old protagonist would still be the dominant voice. This will probably prove tricky, but maybe the reader will find it interesting.Or, I’m also thinking of using some 3rd person scenes, so I can bounce around a little. Not so linear, as my single voice is proving to be.I really like writing from inside the head of this teenager. She will “break the fourth wall” and talk directly to the reader at times.I guess my question is, can I tell the entire story, from her point of view? Am I boxing myself into a corner that may prove to be a disaster?The story is a mystery, thriller. Slightly paranormal.As the plot gets more twists, its harder and harder to tell the story from just the girls POV.Please help with any thoughts.Also, can you think of a successful YA book told in 100% first person, that was a fast paced, suspenseful thriller, that I can read?
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ChynnaMarch 4, 2013Hi Darcy. I know that first person POV uses those personal pronouns such as I, we, ours.anything that includes the narrator of course.but for a multiple first person POVWell, I already read that you can include the character’s name on top of a chapter or put some asterisk or spaces so the reader’s will be guided easily, but what if the POV will need to change after a scene in a chapter?Can you give some examples or suggestions on how I can make a good transition and distinction from one character’s POV to the next character? HeatherJune 21, 2013Hello,I have a question. I am attempting creative writing for the first time and have started my very first novel–and by started, I simply mean I have two sentences and a lot of ideas that need to be sorted out. My question for you is this: my novel will be in 3rd person limited point of view all the way until the very end, but then I want my last short chapter to switch to first person because it will be revealed that my protagonist is writing the novel herself and telling her own story.
Will that be effective or does it just sound silly? I am thinking it will make the theme of the story hit home for my reader and allow them to more deeply connect with my character, but being so new at this I wanted another opinion.Thanks so much! EmiliaJuly 24, 2013Hello!Quick question: I’m trying to develop a story in which I want to give each character a certain depth, but I’m having trouble with the transitioning on narration. For example, how could I make the change, say, in how to narrate what happens on the good guys’ side and the villians’ side? Should I choose one character from each side and tell it from there or stick to omniscient on both sides? I thought about changing the narration with each chapter but I don’t know how’s that going to turn out.
Fiction Writing Tips: Create Characters Your Readers Will Care About Below, you'll find some fiction writing tips to help you create characters that come alive. At the bottom of the page, you'll also find more creative writing resources, including our free online writing courses.Are you losing your mind when a fictional character starts to seem real to you?. A friend of mine was heartbroken when X died in Harry Potter 6 (we'll call him X to keep from spoiling the book if you haven't read it yet). One of my other friends has a serious crush on Edward Cullin, the sexy vampire hero of Stephenie Meyer's popular Twilight series. The second friend recently showed up for a coffee date with dark circles under her eyes. She told me she'd been up half the night finishing a mystery novel because she was afraid the fictional detective might get picked off by the Mob.As far as I'm aware, neither of these women has exhibited any other signs of mental illness.
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There are writers who can make perfectly sane readers cry and fall in love and lose sleep over fictional characters, and you can learn how to do this too.Advertisement:Fiction writing tips - Inventing your charactersWhere do fictional characters come from? Does the stork bring them; do they grow in cabbage patches? Both seem like possibilities, since story characters can pop up just about everywhere else.Some places to start:.
Someone you see on the street or in the supermarket. Imagine a life for this person, and you've got a fictional character. Take a picture of a person in a magazine. Invent a name for him or her, a personality, hopes and fears, annoying habits. Open the phone book to a random name. Let's say you come up with 'B.
What might the 'B.' Write down the first thing that comes to mind; for example, Bertha. When you imagine someone named Bertha Goulding, what mental picture occurs to you? I see someone tall and fat, maybe sixty years old, with black curly hair and red lipstick. Turn the name you've chosen into a fictional character.Fiction writing tips - Getting to know your charactersTo convince readers that your character is a real person, the first step is to convince yourself.The writer Patricia Highsmith confessed to being a little bit in love with her own character, Tom Ripley. When I read Ripley's Game, I admit I became quite fond of him myself, possibly something to worry about since the character is both a sociopath and a killer.Writing character profiles is a great way to get to know your characters so that they start to come to life for you.
Make notes for yourself on the character's appearance, personality, history, current situation, close relationships, hopes and fears. Some writers have a list of questions that they answer about each character.A warningDon't try to stuff all this information into your story. You don't want to overwhelm your readers with a complete background file on your character. The idea is to develop a deep knowledge of your character yourself. Then you can use this knowledge to shape your story and let readers get to know your character in a gradual way.As you are writing your story, every time you put your character into a situation, ask yourself, 'What would he or she do? How would he or she do it?
What would happen next?' Then trust the answers. Never try to force a character to do act in a way that's not natural for that character. If you cheat, your readers will know it. The character or the story will feel false.But if you do things right, your deep knowledge of your character will be transmitted to your readers, who will feel like they're reading about a real person.Fiction writing tips - Next stepsWhat would you like to do now?
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